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Revising the draft

Revising the draft

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Revising the draft

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This movie will make a lot more sense if you watched the previous movie, Writing the First Draft. That's where I constructed a short informational video script that introduced a new handheld, solar panel charging device. I used some of the material from the website of the fictional solar panel manufacturer, Connect Eco. So I met with the client, I presented the client, and of course, the client had some changes that they suggested. The first change was the CEO didn't want to be on camera. He delegated that to his Vice-President of Research, Talia Wilson. And they also wanted to make sure that her name and title was included in the script. The editor would've probably done that anyway, but they wanted to see it in the script and I think it's a good idea. They wanted to refine the focus of this script to just solar, since they're introducing a handheld solar panel charging device. So they wanted to remove all mention of wind from this script and focus just on solar. Then they wanted to…

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