From the course: Creating a Short Film: 02 Writing
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Evaluating our script
From the course: Creating a Short Film: 02 Writing
Evaluating our script
- So, how did we do with our script? Well, it's not great. Part of this whole training was to make a film that wasn't comfortable for me, so that I would make mistakes. And writing a drama about sisterhood in a fantasy setting is obviously not my forte. But there are some interesting elements, I think, and it has the potential to be much better with all the realizations and growth that I've had since that first draft. What do you think would've made it better? As you watch the film or read the script, you'll certainly notice problems, especially after going through this training. But noticing problems doesn't make you a writer. Creating and contributing does. So, what specifically would you add to make the film more powerful? I think if I could do it all over again, I would make the whole film more streamlined and straightforward. I think we did a lot of good with the re-write, focusing on Cordeia and her journey and removing tons of the mythology about the gods and all that. But I…
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